Corrections to the Designing for Impact Report

This page is to summarize adjustments made to the report Designing for Impact [1] by Jessica Clark and Barbara Abrash, after Nov. 11, 2011.

* The page numbers on this page correspond to the PDF version [2], while the corrections were made to the HTML version [3].

* Only minor changes and typo errors were made, nothing significant to effect the conclution or analysis of the report.

Evaluating Documentary, The State of the Field

1. p9, line 9 and line 12

changed "Fledgling fund" to "Fledgling Fund"

(Typo correction) 

2. p14, line 12

changed "campagins" to "campagin"

(Typo correction) 

3. p17,  line 9 from the bottom

Changed "notes" from italicized to normal

(format adjustment) 

 

Appendix II

Lioness

1. p39, Overview – 2^nd paragraph, 3^rd  sentence

Changed "A PBS national Veterans Day broadcast (2008)" to "A November PBS broadcast, in honor of Veterans Day"

(The national PBS feed was in November but not all stations chose to broadcast it on Veterans Day – some before, some on Veterans Day and some after.)

2. p40, Catalyst - 1^st sentence

Changed "two documentary filmmakers, journalist Daria Sommers and cultural anthropologist Meg McLagan, to "two documentary filmmakers, Daria Sommers and Meg McLagan"

(Per filmmaker's request, refer to Daria Sommers and Meg McLagan as documentary filmmakers only)

3. p41, Funding Model - 3^rd paragraph

Replaced the 2nd sentence with:

An investment by Impact Partners was repaid with sales broadcast and sales revenues within a year from the film's festival debut.  

(Information correction)

4. p43, Impact - Engagement - 2^nd bullet point, 2^nd line

Replaced "Iran" with "Afghanistan"

(Information correction)

5. p44, Impact -Influence - 1^st bullet point, 2^nd sentence

Replaced "Valentine's Day" with "Veterans Day"

(Information correction)

State Of Fear: The Truth About Terrorism

1. p59, the part before Overview

Replaced "2008" with "2005"

(Information correction)